Post by TheFiredragon222 on Aug 20, 2013 3:12:46 GMT -8
Volume 1
By: Scott Kiistner
The Cast:
Phil
Marco
Zippies Employe
Policeman
Dr. Joe
Bruce the Salesman
Refree Troy
Page 1
On a nice peaceful day, Phil is going on a nice walk and as he is walking he sees some legs sticking out of the ground.
"Hey Marco" Phil cried out. As he noticed the suit.
Marco did't respond, so Phil got suprised!
"What happened?" Phil then asks.
Again no response. "Why won't he talk?" Phil though to himself as the legs were wobbling and wiggling. POP! Out poppeed Marco's head! Marco is sitting there gasping for air, while Phil is sitting there in suprise.
"YOUR ALIVE!" Phil yelled as he smiled in shock. "Why didn't you help me?" Marco quietly replied.
"YIPEE!" Phil screamed as he ignored what Marco said. Marco sighed.
Phil still was cheering and jumping as Marco walked away and said, "I'm headin' home."
Page 2
"YAWWN! Ahhh a fresh new day!" Marco said as he crawled outta bed. Outside Marco heard Phil yelling, "I'm Gonna Be Late!!!". So Marco then rushed out there and stopped Phil as he said, "What ya late for Phil?".
Phil replied in a hesitant fashion, "Breakfast at Zippies, it's almost lunch time!"
Marco the stood there in suprise! "You eat at Zippies?" Marco exclaimed as he seen Phil was looking really impatient. "YEA!" Phil replied as if it was like Zippies was popular.
Marco kinda smiled trying to hold in his laugh. "Why don't you come eat at my house!" he said, "c'mon!". Marco and Phil then set off to eat at Marco's home!
Page 3
Later that day at about supper time, Phil was at Zippies lookin' at the menu. "What can I get for ya sir?" The employe asked.
"Uhh how about a steak please?" Marco answered.
"That's five dollars please?" the employe responded!" Phil handed over the money. And the wait for the steak began!
Five...Hours...Later...
"Where is my STEAK!" Phil yelled!
"ten minutes." the worker replied.
Ten...Minutes...Later...
"It's been ten minutes!" Marco Exclaimed.
"Uhh well sorry sir, but we gotta close so bye." the worker said.
"WHAT!" Phil responded!
"Listen sir, were closed so BYE!"
Phil was mad as we stomped out! He felt rage everywhere, but he emerged unsuccessful...
Page 4
Later that night.....
"Ugh i'm really tired", mumbled Phil. As he walked slowly down the path.
"and hungry..." he added.
Phil sighed. "Hey Phil wuzzup?" Marco exclaimed as Phil's stomach groaned.
"I'm tired and hungry", Phill responded. "oh...", Marco said.
"Then eat and goto BED!!" Marco yelled "I'm to weak to do anything" Phil exclaimed as he started to wobble back and forth. WOOSH! Phil passed out in the middle of the road. Marco was shocked! Then sighed as he walked away.
Page 5
"Hey! Your arrested and have the right to remain silent!" a voice called out.
"Why am I!?..." Phil muttered. The Policeman then took him to jail and locked 'em up. "Why me...?" Phil asked as he sighed.
Then the door slowly opened and a breif shadow was seen. Phil looking amazed. Marco the fell to the floor laughing harder than he could handle. Phil then mumbled. "Don't sleep on the road!" Marco Stated.
Phil got even more irate. "Bye!" Marco said as he skipped away in joy.
SLAM! The door shut. Phil then looked and was feeling lonely. The Next Day! "I'm Out!", Phil cried, "now time for revenge!"
Ding Dong! Marco slowly walked towards his door. WHAM BONK BAM CRASH SLAM! "ow....." Marco said as he was knocked out cold.
Page 6
"Ok so where does it hurt?" Dr.Joe asked.
"every,,,,where...." Marco mumbled.
"Any more details?", asked the doctor.
"it hurts....." Marco replied. "anything else...?" Dr. Joe asked again.
"nope..." Marco responded. "well I can't help you so bye!" Dr. Joe stated as he walked out of the room. "ow....ow....ow...ow..." Marco said everytime he took a step.
"Hey wuzzup?" Phil asked as Marco passed by.
"Jerk!" Marco said in an angry fashion.
"Bye I guess..." Phil said in a pretended confused fashion. Marco sighed as he was walking. "AHHHH!" Marco screamed as he tripped and tumbled over a rock. CRASH!! "owww..." Marco muttered as he got up from the fall slowly. "I need to get home." he exclaimed. "phew" Marco said as his home was in the near distance. "finally!" he said as he walked into his house.
Page 7
"Ya know what....I wanna car!!" exclaimed Marco.
Marco then went to the Cars Cars Cars! Shop. "Perfect!" he said. Marco then entered the building and seen Bruno! "Can I have a car?" Marco asked.
"Sure that'll be $250,00" Bruno said abrubtly. "WHAT!!!" Marco yelled in suprise.
"Did I stutter ....$250,00! Now cough up the dough or go HOME!""fine..." Marco said as he dug in his wallet, "Here!" Marco mumbled as he handed the money to Bruno.
"Thanks!" Bruno exclaimed as he gladly took the money. "Bye!" Marco yelled as he drove away from the shop.
Marco then seen Phil on the road. "Wuzzup?", Marco said as he drove by Phil. Phil got suprised. "I need a car..." Phil muttered as he seen Marco drive off in the distance.
Page 8
Phil has decided he wanted a car! So he went to Cars Cars Cars! To go buy one. "Hi!", Phil said.
"What Now?" Questioned Bruce.
"I'd like a car!" Answered Phil.
"another one? Man your rich!" Bruce exclaimed, "250,00" he said.
"Here ya go!" Phil replied as he passed over the money.
"Thanks" Responded Bruce, "Bye!' Bruce said in glee as he got more money!
Phil then went up to Marco and said, "Let's Race!".
"Ok?" Marco Responded.
Marco and Phil then lined up at the starting line. "On your marks......get set......GO!" the Refree said as the cars zoomed away.
The cars raced neck to neck close as ever, and the finish line was arriving shortly.
Marco was ahead most of the race. The last second a VROOM! Marco passed the finish line before Phil. "Marco Wins!" The Refree said in joy.
Phil sighed as he seen Marco claim the Victory.
Page 9
The Next Day....
Phil was thinking last night about the race and how he lost. Personally he though Marco cheated. So to deal with his problems he had to fight Fire with Fire!
Phil then went to the Cars Cars Cars Shop.
"What ya want?" Bruce asked in a grouchy tone.
"A BOMB!!!" Phil replied.
"no!" Bruce said abruptly.
"awww" Phil said as he walked away.
Out in a feild not too far from Cars Cars Cars Marco had a shovel and was digging up an X!
Phil then realized there was a secret bomb hidden in a feild passed down by him and Marco's father. He new Marco would try something fishy so he went to go find out.
As Marco was digging he seen the 'BIG' written out on the Bomb. Marco dug up the bomb and stepped aside to take a rest as Phil pulled up. Both equal distance from the Bomb, starring eachother down for who will get the glory of the family Bomb. We will return in the final Page to see who WINS!?
Page 10 Final Page
Both starring at eachother, equal distances from the Bomb, our Buddies Marco and Phil are eye to eye, face to face! Who will get the Glory of the families BOMB?
In a long distance away from the bomb, there was Bruce with a TNT ignitor, that had been attached to the bomb, secretly. Bruce feeling really rotton and crude decided to Push the ignitor and Blow Up the bomb. The line of string passed by Zippies and a few workers and the Police seen the fuse go down the line. They felt very shocked and had the urge to run!
Marco and Phil stepped closer to the Bomb, only realizing it was about to BLOW! So they hopped in Phil's veichle and stepped on the Gas.
"Drive Faster" Phil yelled as they were escaping.
KA-BOOOOOOOM!!!!!!!!
The Bomb exploded.
What happened to our freinds, what will come of there reputation, what has happened to there town?
Find out in Volume 2!
By: Scott Kiistner
The Cast:
Phil
Marco
Zippies Employe
Policeman
Dr. Joe
Bruce the Salesman
Refree Troy
Page 1
On a nice peaceful day, Phil is going on a nice walk and as he is walking he sees some legs sticking out of the ground.
"Hey Marco" Phil cried out. As he noticed the suit.
Marco did't respond, so Phil got suprised!
"What happened?" Phil then asks.
Again no response. "Why won't he talk?" Phil though to himself as the legs were wobbling and wiggling. POP! Out poppeed Marco's head! Marco is sitting there gasping for air, while Phil is sitting there in suprise.
"YOUR ALIVE!" Phil yelled as he smiled in shock. "Why didn't you help me?" Marco quietly replied.
"YIPEE!" Phil screamed as he ignored what Marco said. Marco sighed.
Phil still was cheering and jumping as Marco walked away and said, "I'm headin' home."
Page 2
"YAWWN! Ahhh a fresh new day!" Marco said as he crawled outta bed. Outside Marco heard Phil yelling, "I'm Gonna Be Late!!!". So Marco then rushed out there and stopped Phil as he said, "What ya late for Phil?".
Phil replied in a hesitant fashion, "Breakfast at Zippies, it's almost lunch time!"
Marco the stood there in suprise! "You eat at Zippies?" Marco exclaimed as he seen Phil was looking really impatient. "YEA!" Phil replied as if it was like Zippies was popular.
Marco kinda smiled trying to hold in his laugh. "Why don't you come eat at my house!" he said, "c'mon!". Marco and Phil then set off to eat at Marco's home!
Page 3
Later that day at about supper time, Phil was at Zippies lookin' at the menu. "What can I get for ya sir?" The employe asked.
"Uhh how about a steak please?" Marco answered.
"That's five dollars please?" the employe responded!" Phil handed over the money. And the wait for the steak began!
Five...Hours...Later...
"Where is my STEAK!" Phil yelled!
"ten minutes." the worker replied.
Ten...Minutes...Later...
"It's been ten minutes!" Marco Exclaimed.
"Uhh well sorry sir, but we gotta close so bye." the worker said.
"WHAT!" Phil responded!
"Listen sir, were closed so BYE!"
Phil was mad as we stomped out! He felt rage everywhere, but he emerged unsuccessful...
Page 4
Later that night.....
"Ugh i'm really tired", mumbled Phil. As he walked slowly down the path.
"and hungry..." he added.
Phil sighed. "Hey Phil wuzzup?" Marco exclaimed as Phil's stomach groaned.
"I'm tired and hungry", Phill responded. "oh...", Marco said.
"Then eat and goto BED!!" Marco yelled "I'm to weak to do anything" Phil exclaimed as he started to wobble back and forth. WOOSH! Phil passed out in the middle of the road. Marco was shocked! Then sighed as he walked away.
Page 5
"Hey! Your arrested and have the right to remain silent!" a voice called out.
"Why am I!?..." Phil muttered. The Policeman then took him to jail and locked 'em up. "Why me...?" Phil asked as he sighed.
Then the door slowly opened and a breif shadow was seen. Phil looking amazed. Marco the fell to the floor laughing harder than he could handle. Phil then mumbled. "Don't sleep on the road!" Marco Stated.
Phil got even more irate. "Bye!" Marco said as he skipped away in joy.
SLAM! The door shut. Phil then looked and was feeling lonely. The Next Day! "I'm Out!", Phil cried, "now time for revenge!"
Ding Dong! Marco slowly walked towards his door. WHAM BONK BAM CRASH SLAM! "ow....." Marco said as he was knocked out cold.
Page 6
"Ok so where does it hurt?" Dr.Joe asked.
"every,,,,where...." Marco mumbled.
"Any more details?", asked the doctor.
"it hurts....." Marco replied. "anything else...?" Dr. Joe asked again.
"nope..." Marco responded. "well I can't help you so bye!" Dr. Joe stated as he walked out of the room. "ow....ow....ow...ow..." Marco said everytime he took a step.
"Hey wuzzup?" Phil asked as Marco passed by.
"Jerk!" Marco said in an angry fashion.
"Bye I guess..." Phil said in a pretended confused fashion. Marco sighed as he was walking. "AHHHH!" Marco screamed as he tripped and tumbled over a rock. CRASH!! "owww..." Marco muttered as he got up from the fall slowly. "I need to get home." he exclaimed. "phew" Marco said as his home was in the near distance. "finally!" he said as he walked into his house.
Page 7
"Ya know what....I wanna car!!" exclaimed Marco.
Marco then went to the Cars Cars Cars! Shop. "Perfect!" he said. Marco then entered the building and seen Bruno! "Can I have a car?" Marco asked.
"Sure that'll be $250,00" Bruno said abrubtly. "WHAT!!!" Marco yelled in suprise.
"Did I stutter ....$250,00! Now cough up the dough or go HOME!""fine..." Marco said as he dug in his wallet, "Here!" Marco mumbled as he handed the money to Bruno.
"Thanks!" Bruno exclaimed as he gladly took the money. "Bye!" Marco yelled as he drove away from the shop.
Marco then seen Phil on the road. "Wuzzup?", Marco said as he drove by Phil. Phil got suprised. "I need a car..." Phil muttered as he seen Marco drive off in the distance.
Page 8
Phil has decided he wanted a car! So he went to Cars Cars Cars! To go buy one. "Hi!", Phil said.
"What Now?" Questioned Bruce.
"I'd like a car!" Answered Phil.
"another one? Man your rich!" Bruce exclaimed, "250,00" he said.
"Here ya go!" Phil replied as he passed over the money.
"Thanks" Responded Bruce, "Bye!' Bruce said in glee as he got more money!
Phil then went up to Marco and said, "Let's Race!".
"Ok?" Marco Responded.
Marco and Phil then lined up at the starting line. "On your marks......get set......GO!" the Refree said as the cars zoomed away.
The cars raced neck to neck close as ever, and the finish line was arriving shortly.
Marco was ahead most of the race. The last second a VROOM! Marco passed the finish line before Phil. "Marco Wins!" The Refree said in joy.
Phil sighed as he seen Marco claim the Victory.
Page 9
The Next Day....
Phil was thinking last night about the race and how he lost. Personally he though Marco cheated. So to deal with his problems he had to fight Fire with Fire!
Phil then went to the Cars Cars Cars Shop.
"What ya want?" Bruce asked in a grouchy tone.
"A BOMB!!!" Phil replied.
"no!" Bruce said abruptly.
"awww" Phil said as he walked away.
Out in a feild not too far from Cars Cars Cars Marco had a shovel and was digging up an X!
Phil then realized there was a secret bomb hidden in a feild passed down by him and Marco's father. He new Marco would try something fishy so he went to go find out.
As Marco was digging he seen the 'BIG' written out on the Bomb. Marco dug up the bomb and stepped aside to take a rest as Phil pulled up. Both equal distance from the Bomb, starring eachother down for who will get the glory of the family Bomb. We will return in the final Page to see who WINS!?
Page 10 Final Page
Both starring at eachother, equal distances from the Bomb, our Buddies Marco and Phil are eye to eye, face to face! Who will get the Glory of the families BOMB?
In a long distance away from the bomb, there was Bruce with a TNT ignitor, that had been attached to the bomb, secretly. Bruce feeling really rotton and crude decided to Push the ignitor and Blow Up the bomb. The line of string passed by Zippies and a few workers and the Police seen the fuse go down the line. They felt very shocked and had the urge to run!
Marco and Phil stepped closer to the Bomb, only realizing it was about to BLOW! So they hopped in Phil's veichle and stepped on the Gas.
"Drive Faster" Phil yelled as they were escaping.
KA-BOOOOOOOM!!!!!!!!
The Bomb exploded.
What happened to our freinds, what will come of there reputation, what has happened to there town?
Find out in Volume 2!
